( Another long chapter )

( Anyone who can guess the name of Prowl's teacher [G1 mech with TFA cameo] gets a cookie )

The treat that Prowl and Positron are making is inspired by akutaq
( Wikipedia article on akutaq )

So I suppose I should be working on my novel, but for the time being, I want to kinda throw this out there to the general public for thoughts.

I got my first (non-friend) critique of The Invictus, from another writer on NaNo, which went something like this:

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Chapter Three is super long. Sorry about that. ^^;

( Chapter Three )

( Chapter Two )

( Edited Chapter One )

( Prologue for The Invictus )

I'm doing the National Novel Writing Month project, where you write 50,000 words in the month of November-- roughly 1667 words / day. o_o

It starts at midnight local time, so I'm going to be selling my soul in 40 minutes. x3
I'm writing a piece called The Invictus, a Transformers Animated fanfic that explores Prowl's past beyond the series. A prequel ( Read more... )